Topic:prison is the best punishment for criminals,Discuss
: With the introduction of many high-tech devices, many crimes appear and have a bad influence on society.Consequently,I partly believe that putting these culprits in a jail is a good choices.
Firstly,Imprisonment can make offenders to improve their deed and their mind.By thinking back what they have done in the past and see the punishment they are suffering from,perhaps,most prisoners will want to change their future and start to be a good person.
Secondly, prison can prevent recurrence of wrongdoing. There are many criminals who know to repent and also who don’t.Infraction happens once can happen twice.If there are no prison,crime will happen frequently without being inhibited and people’s lives will turn to a mess.Therefore imprisonment is totally necessary in today life.
On the other hand, wrongdoers are not always bad.They sometimes might be under somebody’s thumb or are forced severely to do sth illegally without being able to resist.Imprisonment can be unfair to those people in some cases.The innocent,from time to time can be deceived or threatened to take the blame for the case in stead of the perpetrator(thu pham).There are so many cases like that had happened before.For instance, Geogre Stinney,a small 14 innocent boy, had to suffer from a death penalty on account of an baseless calumny.People at that time were under the impression that he kill the 2 girls.He had to withstand all these things and his innocence was only gave back after 70 years by a lawyer.
In conclusion, incarceration brings about many benefits for our society however the jury should take the evidence into account more clearly to avoid mistaking perpetrator for innocent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2947761194 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43165165099 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675373134328 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 203.3366803 49.4020404114 412% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.5 106.682146367 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.6666666667 20.7667163134 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.8333333333 7.06120827912 338% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104587540507 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546764948659 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294497044495 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533389789175 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322203268861 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 13.0946893788 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.29 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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