Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but its disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Since international transportation was improved, people have been travelling more than before across the world. This has made tourism one of the main source of incoming to governments. Despite all the benefits, this essay is going to talk about its drawbacks which could not be denied. I myself totally agree that being aware of bad points of this issue would be a helpful way to decline the adverse effects on societies.
Causing horrible effects on environment could be mentioned as the first significant drawback of tourism. For example, being ignored the policy about rubbish by visitors has made littering problem an issue which have been noticed by many people. As a result, governments have had difficulties such as wasting much amount of money and workforce to handle this problem. Moreover, increasing the number of vehicles which have used for foreigners to give them access to all parts of cities, have increased air pollution. Not only have this bad effects happened on the natural environment, but also has affected in individuals. Including transferring various disease to other countries and threaten people’s lives. And after all, local people are the ones who have suffered from these problems such as land pollution, illnesses which are the harmful causes of this subject.
Additionally, having many foreign visitors in a country may have changed its culture. Although one of major reason why people like travelling is seeing various lifestyles, it has affected on local people specially youngsters. For instance, more local people have liked wearing modern clothes rather than traditional ones as well as they have pursued more modern dances than the traditional ones. Consequently, their specific heritage may have been forgotten which has made many countries like each other by dressing or behaving like one another.
In conclusion, every issue including tourism has diverse good and bad aspects which should not be neglected. Although it has been one of the most important source of revenue for many countries, humans could be able to decrease its damaging causes by being informed of all its sides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, after all, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27941176471 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71255411503 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585294117647 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3508781545 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.588235294 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15732629249 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560985270799 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563287980683 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119936616274 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749697828923 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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