The tradition that family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts on families and societies?
Irrefutably,In this contemporary world,The culture of eating meals with kith and kin is escaping due to varied reasons.I agree with this rubric and this essay would shed light on the valid standpoints in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with the favour of notion,There are cardinal points behind the preposition.The first and foremost is owing to social media.Generally,Now people are more engaged in browsing than past few years.They do not have time to sit together with each other in the meal.Masses eat their meals in different times.To exemplify,According to the survey,It can be manifested that,The proportion of meals with family is declining.On the flip side,Without family increase dramatically.
Furthermore,Misunderstanding in the family arises that result into bad relationships between family owing to which masses prefer to eat meal separately.Ego between family members is also a cause of this.Tensions,Depressions,Stresses are main effects of eating food separately.For example,A research of oxford university,It stated that, Half of the population affected with mental diseases is due to poor relationship with family members.
In the final rekonings,this essay tend to reiterate that Although,culture of eating meals is slowly disappearing yet,many families intact of meal sharing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95238095238 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.36233680077 2.80592935109 155% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661375661376 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.847542908 49.4020404114 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 281.25 106.682146367 264% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.25 20.7667163134 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232723322782 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144431804385 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625269254445 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144431804385 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625269254445 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.2 13.0946893788 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.85 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.12 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.4 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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