Developing countries such as India, China, and Brazil are rich with traditional heritage. Their culture and traditions are of thousand years old, and amalgamation of various cultures from ages among them. Owing to this fact, these destinations are stationed with many good tourist spots which are attracting tourists from various nations over the years. Moreover, by increasing in number of tourists the government of tourism not only earning heftily, but also producing employment. Further, these also induces globalization in that country. Hence, I believe that it has been helping people of these countries to enhance modern way of living.
Firstly,due to this practice in developing nations, many people are earning their daily bread by selling many kind of objects. Further, it helps government to earn revenue to restore and manage these tourist spots. For instance, the great wall of china is one of the wonder of world, and a great tourist spot. People from many countries visit this spot. This help Chinese government not only in earn revenue, but also in restoring the remnants which had been getting fallen over the years. In this way this auspicious monuments are getting preserved. Several many spots can be observed across India also.
Secondly, increase in population of tourist in these spots also changing the life style of the surround population. of course, tourists come from several part of world with different life styles, who are not accustom with the life style of the residents.For this reason, the residents are adopting some of their life style so that it can create a symbiotic ambiance.Therefore the residents are not adhere to their early life style and changing their life style with modern changes within their society.Thus over the period these life style factor also effecting their style in a modern way.
Finally, by increase in the population of tourists not only the government are getting benefit, but also the surrounding demography also updating their way of life. In this way a mutually productive environment is established across these developing countries. Furthermore, the life style of residents are changing with the modern changes to make their life more suitable.
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- Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime To what extent do you agree 78
- Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in childhood obesity, while others think it is the fault of the parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 56
- Nowadays men's sports are given far more attention by society compared to women's sports.what are the reasons for that?Do you think is a positive or a negative development? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, kind of, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28248587571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72471648543 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480225988701 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.3028470342 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.888888889 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231222901562 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748463013404 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602546168325 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150414823784 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415644059316 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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