Traditional lifestyle is going from one generation to other generation. Tourist come from several countries to visit local places to see there cultural values In my opinion, I disagree that local people do not adapt a modern way of lifestyle by influenced to out comers.
There are ample of reasons which support to my statement. Firstly, Most of people get influenced by out comers. For instance from dressing sense, food and dance style. Secondly, deny local masses likes to celebrate the festival of other country and enjoy them by decorating their homes for the welcoming of the tourist. For example, the festival of Christmas celebrates by a number of people in the India, and they enjoy this festival.
Moving Furthermore, a plethora of individuals adapts the language of other country by getting impressed by their language. For instance, English language by a number of countries to build up their career and by the other people to enhance their level of intelligence. Moreover, lifestyle are consequently affected by the local people owing to the fact that they like to look up to date with the passage of time.
To Optimize, these ares are the main point favors my opinion that tourist an affects local masses to change their lifestyle according to the modern way of life and to look up to date with the passage of time.
- The traditional life style of local people in developing countries is attracting and increasing the number of tourists to the countries which has the effect of preventing local people changing to modern ways To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Many people aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives but few people achieve it What are the causes of this How to overcome this problem 67
- The traditional life style of local people in developing countries is attracting and increasing the number of tourists to the countries which has the effect of preventing local people changing to modern ways To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...which support to my statement. Firstly, Most of people get influenced by out comers. For insta...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an affect' or simply 'affects'?
Suggestion: an affect; affects
...in point favors my opinion that tourist an affects local masses to change their lifestyle ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92920353982 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64953742285 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526548672566 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0918430802 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.272727273 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29215508805 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994947032691 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725134782784 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177586943797 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483078269548 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...which support to my statement. Firstly, Most of people get influenced by out comers. For insta...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an affect' or simply 'affects'?
Suggestion: an affect; affects
...in point favors my opinion that tourist an affects local masses to change their lifestyle ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92920353982 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64953742285 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526548672566 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0918430802 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.272727273 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29215508805 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994947032691 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725134782784 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177586943797 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483078269548 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.