Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and the government should encourage businesses to move from cities to rural?
In the industrialization era, the increasingly serious issues of both traffic and accommodation, the government have a policy to persuade the businesses into moving out of the municipal area to the countryside. While there are many disadvantages, but I still believe that the benefits are greater than the drawbacks.
From the one side, the movement of the industries and businesses to rural areas brings a lot of advantages. The industry can often produce pollution, so locating them away from residential area is sensible. The pollution concentration in a region is lower due to the reduction of factories. Moving businesses and their facilities to the countryside will cause urban population to shrink substantially which helps reduce traffic congestion. In Ho Chi Minh city for example, most people travel to work by private vehicles, and this causes to overcrowded roads during the rush hour. Moreover, local communities usually support the arrival of new businesses as they bring more career opportunities which leads to the workforce balance.
On the other hand, not only residents but also the businesses will likely cope with a number of various factors. The conditions of the countryside along with the rural transport infrastructure are not advanced enough, therefore, the transportation of goods, materials and products will be complicated and shipping costs are more expensive. Obviously, Internet connection may not be reliable and this can adversely affect companies. Further, workers might not be as skilled as those in urban centres. A lack of experienced workers can get the firms into trouble.
In conclusion, everything has pros and corns, the wave of the businesses to the metropolitan to a rural area is not an exception. In my opinion, I find this idea justifiable; however, at the same time, some other initiatives should be implemented in order to solve traffic and housing problems effectively.
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- Land pollution’s causes 56
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- Land pollution’s causes 56
- Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and the government should encourage businesses to move from cities to rural? 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35643564356 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20014268436 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633663366337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1831419989 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.2 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23575836569 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575608993459 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612063671875 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125783265133 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526533645325 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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