training parents for bringing their children up.
In recent decades, and due to the technology development, the shape of growing children up also have changed completely in compared to the past. This event maybe create some problem for parents. Some people believe that parents should spend a training course for upbringing their children. I am strongly agree with this idea for several reasons. Two of the most important my reasons have mentioned as follows.
These days, children access to the information such as, picture, film, documents etc. Through social media like internet, TV and so on have much easy. Nonetheless, among whole of the beneficial subjects, some of these information may be have detrimental influences on the children. The kind of parents reaction about it، can have a destructive impacts on children at the future such as, join gangs or juvenile delinquency. Recent research show that, the banning of the children from using internet or social media have a reverse result, likewise absolute freedom also, has a deleterious effects. Unfortunately, majority of parents select one of the above ways. I think if they spend a training course, it assists them to get a right decision when confront with this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...pbringing their children. I am strongly agree with this idea for several reasons. Two...
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Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...ole of the beneficial subjects, some of these information may be have detrimental influences on t...
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Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'impact'?
Suggestion: impact
...action about it، can have a destructive impacts on children at the future such as, join...
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Line 5, column 588, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...bsolute freedom also, has a deleterious effects. Unfortunately, majority of parents sel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, may, nonetheless, so, i think, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20725388601 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75035355601 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694300518135 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4352493195 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267924013023 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085770337841 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958397708141 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217210487311 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081543448152 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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