People get budget-friendly tours abroad so some countries welcomed foreign tourists in their land. Going into different places could have either pros or cons, which I will discuss here in my essay.
To begin with, many cheap travel tours make people go abroad since it is one kind of leisure activity and has an impact to the host country. The people on excursion will gain an experience to know the culture and make them fascinated by natural beauty, which is also the reason as to why is travelling a form of an escape from their busy lives. Moreover, employment of the people will likely to devour and some locally made products can be sold from that country where most tourist could buy as souvenirs. On top of that, tourism is a sector that also gives good value for the economy so travelling is in demand especially if it is inexpensive.
On the other hand, there are negative impacts of putting on a trip and this could give bad reputation to some countries. Tourism has an impact in our environment, which means that people are liable in some unnecessary acts such as littering, excessive water use, traffic congestion and pollution; these could make some of tourist attractions unpleasant to visit. Furthermore, certain acts of crime is possible such as pickpocketing and fake travel agencies.
Thereby, travelling inexpensively could have both positive and negative tendencies since this activity is not only for relaxation but also for it could mean harm to our environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, as to, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93227091633 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73744321215 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6541530842 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.8 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1754961271 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709353311291 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542618308214 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112924493986 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407321908899 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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