The trend of increased consumer goods production is damaging the natural environment. Why is it still happening? What are the solutions for this situation?
Environmental pollution has been escalating rapidly and one of the main causative factor is excessive production of commodities. Although, government has many legislation over this circumstances, reduction of distracting environmental policy has still on waiting by the influence of real estate mafia and industrialization. However, to tackle such problems by strict legislation over industries, and proper control of waste disposal and management along with eco friendly system.
To begin with the exact cause of failure to success that, improper authority management and launders impacts over law and order. Firstly, many consumer product industries are working in the hands of high corporate capitalist and they would provide bribe to the authorized person to mitigate punishments and legal enforcement. Secondly, other cause of this inclination that, improper disposal of waste and garbage of consumer goods. Many people throwing the cover of goods products which made up of plastic and inorganic substances makes up the pollution on nature. For instance, recent survey report from BBC explain, 100 more tonnes of plastic waste encountered from river, seas and open spaces.
However, proper constitution on industries and society would inhibit environmental hazard to some extent. Irrespective of plutocrat recognition, law and order must apply to every citizen equally and, strict punishment on waste disposal , and encourage people to being clean and tidy atmosphere globally. Make use of management over natural violation, and reduce consumption of natural resources like water, plants,and so on to prepare consumer goods and package and sealing as much as by eco friendly products would may lead to reduction of pollution in environment. For example, Government of India established plastic free state award makes many cities pollution to dip than previous years.
To conclude, consumer good production is indispensable in daily living, nevertheless, appropriate management and route cause analysis laws may limit environmental pollution and endangered nature system.
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Suggestion: much legislation; a good deal of legislation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81045751634 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09311817189 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8196877661 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.769230769 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182505879946 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610998422474 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513906910371 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118212285322 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261003420945 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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