The UN recently celebrated its 70th anniversary. What benefits has it brought during this time? Do you think the UN will last another 70 years?
On October 24th, 1945, after the end of the Second World War, countries around the globe gathered around to discuss the rebuilding of peace and harmony in the world, while also resolving conflicts and issues between nations worldwide. Hence, there needs to be a neutral participant, unwavering and uninfluenced by countries for their benefit. Thus, an organization was born, the United Nations. During its 70 years of existence, the United Nations has been rapidly expanding its role as the peacekeeper of the globe, reaching out to many more activities other than settling confrontations. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss its achievements in its role as the leading peacekeeping foundation of human civilization, along with the possibilities of its future.
When talking about the UN, it has, without a doubt, played a critical role in promoting peace and unity throughout the planet, stopping disputes, and organizing and providing aid to many parts of the world with difficulties. It is the agency that hosts the world stage, giving each and every nation a say in global affairs and guaranteeing their rights and respect. Their assistance has proved to be beneficial for countries plagued with social issues such as poverty, illiteracy, and diseases or those affected by natural disasters, such as tsunamis, earthquakes, floods, or eruptions, aiding their recoveries from the impacts. Additionally, the United Nations is also an active participant in the health sector, strengthening global health through its well-known branch, the World Health Organization. Brother states from less urbanized regions have greatly profited from the help of the WHO in improving their national healthcare systems, such as the nationwide education on health keeping, and the eradication of plagues like malaria and cholera. For instance, many countries in Africa, Asia, and South America have been able to curb the waves of various diseases thanks to the assistance of the WHO.
Regarding the second question, the future of the UN. With the rising displeasure of the Middle East with the Western powers, along with the disputes of the South China Sea-Taiwan and the cannot-go-unmentioned Russia invasion of Ukraine, it seems that we are setting a world stage to burn. Despite this grim future, it is worth noting that a myriad of conflicts has been resolved by the UN's efforts to mediate the interest of opposing sides to prevent the last straw. In addition to this, as nations develop and become more interdependent, the more it is required for a podium where they can discuss their disputes and an organization to judge and uphold global justice. While there exist different federations with similar power, none has the matching power that of the UN. Thus, as we progress deeper into the territory of this century full of turmoil, the more it is necessary for us to have a leading figure to control ourselves like the UN.
In conclusion, due to the need for an unbiased organization to be the global leader and the tremendous advancements the UN has made during its past years, I believe that the UN will be an indispensable entity that will exist for years to come.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, regarding, second, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 41.998997996 186% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2653.0 1615.20841683 164% => OK
No of words: 516.0 315.596192385 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14147286822 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93808868012 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 813.6 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3010661185 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.388888889 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150868434209 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480561425492 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526358223921 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106419978916 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548307003953 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 78.4519038076 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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