Unemployment is the biggest problem that every countries are facing in the twenty first century. Despite the several steps from authorities, the problem is still persisting in majority of the countries. In fact, this is the prime reason behind many of the other problems like increase in crime rate and poverty. Once, educated young bloods are considered to be the biggest asset of any economy but, now it's turned to be the burden of the regime. We can not point one single reason behind this scenario, there are several factors which are adding fire to this problem.
To begin with, our education system should be blamed first regarding this issue. Our decade old education system is still giving importance to theoretical based learning rather than practical one. Nowadays companies are looking for people who can able to perform well in a practical scenario. Furthermore, governments are failed to create adequate job oppertunites for the young graduates, they are focusing on other areas like space exploration and military advancements. On top of that, new practices like job outsourcing actually creating a wide gap in the employment market, even though it creates some job opportunities in other part of the world.
To tackle this problem, first the government should try to create as much as job opportunities as they can, by establishing an investment friendly environment in the economy. So that multinational companies can invest and operate in such economies easily. In addition, our eduction should be restructured according to the changing conditions and the requirements of the job market. Subsequently, state should allocate more fund to the development of manufacturing and service sectors in the economy, instead of spending in other areas.
In conclusion, it is true that every part of the world unemployment is a creating a major social scenario. The nations should act wisely to reduce the effect of this problem, before it goes out of our hand. In many parts of the world frustrated unemployed youths are creating so many problems in the countries over all social well being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
... that every countries are facing in the twenty first century. Despite the several steps from...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, look, regarding, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, it is true, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1788856305 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8879154342 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574780058651 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2570545671 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.882352941 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174656341107 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551972726726 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454354812263 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105644889049 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665470012338 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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