Globalisation is a term which has more influence on people than it actually thought. Easy access to any products and services from anywhere in the world resulted in creating a unique practice among people to buying almost anything without considering its use. Experts call this as consumerism, In my opinion it is definitely a negative trend.
One important factor that driving the people to this kind of buying behavior is advertisements. Companies are spending millions of dollars for promoting their products in the market. Consumers are greatly influenced by these commercials, especially when these products are endorsed by their famous celebrities. Furthermore, humans have a tendency to copy from others, it's an in born characteristics of every human being. When they see their peers or neighbours use some products they immediately go for it without even thinking about whether it actually needed for them or not.
This type of practice actually affecting the individual and society as whole in many ways. Firstly, by consuming more than nay person's actual requirements is creating a disparity among people, by some people getting more than what they needed but on the other hand some are not getting anything at all. Moreover this over consumption eventually leads to increase in wastage of products, currently authorities are finding it difficult to deal with the problem of effective garbage disposal. What is more, this buying pattern actually leads to another issue, which is over exploitation of natural resources. Many of natural resources are depleting in an alarming manner, if this trend continues, it would be more difficult for the future generations to survive on our planet.
To recapitulate, inorder to tackle this issue, people should act more sensibly when they purchase something. They should understand that the so called advertisements and other factors are actually leading them to a disastrous future. It is better act now before it's too late.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ns have a tendency to copy from others, its an in born characteristics of every hum...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...d some are not getting anything at all. Moreover this over consumption eventually leads ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an alarming manner" with adverb for "alarming"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...Many of natural resources are depleting in an alarming manner, if this trend continues, it would be m...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e generations to survive on our planet. To recapitulate, inorder to tackle this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, kind of, in my opinion, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3152866242 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91432597251 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0159328397 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.3125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161605143934 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506342394846 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439305333572 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963513911559 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211578477084 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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