Unemployment is one of the biggest problems of contemporary society.
What do you think are the main causes of unemployment?
What solutions can you suggest?
Include and relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Nowadays, unemployment is a major concern all over the globe. For this reason, people are suffering from a lack of money and poverty and also leads to crime as well. In my opinion, lack of skills and machines are the main reasons to make persons unemployed. In this essay, I will discuss these reasons and give productive solutions to reduce unemployment.
To begin with, lack of skill and low-level education create unemployment. To explain this, multinational companies are required specific skills to get a job such as fluent English, computer skills, and many more, which is difficult to find, because a person has a low level of education in most countries. For example, recently I have read an article from the Times of India, which stated that 34% of Indian people are rejected by IT companies last year because they have a lack of English-speaking skills. Therefore, the lack of skills is one of the two main causes of unemployment. However, to resolve this issue, the educational authorities should invest the money and organize free classes as a skill for the job market and also, they should add as the subject in universities.
Furthermore, due to advancements in technology, machines are used instead of manpower which is the second main concern to create unemployment. To illustrate this, most companies using heavy machines because they are more reliable, accurate, faster, can work 24 hours a day. Moreover, companies are preferring robots and machines because they are cost-effective laborers. For example, the Tata car manufacture in India has replaced their workers with robots. Therefore, my uncle has lost his job from that company. To fix this issue, governments should create legislation to limit robot workers and use a certain amount of manpower.
In conclusion, unemployment is a major problem. Lack of skills and machines are the main two reasons. However, the government should pay attention to resolve this problem and can reduce the unemployment rate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ork 24 hours a day. Moreover, companies are preferring robots and machines because they are co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1826625387 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95466030885 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53560371517 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8003348576 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.086407527835 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374573003806 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454257859672 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728789956041 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555502658644 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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