Unemployment is one of the biggest problems of contemporary society. What do you think are the main causes of unemployment? What solutions can you suggest?
Since the beginning of the 21st century, the entire world community has been suffering from various recruitment difficulties. An opinion exists that widespread of joblessness is one of the most essential challenges for the modern community. This particular essay will examine the reasons for job losses and propose appropriate keys to solve this issue.
I am convinced that two main reasons for joblessness existence are the country's poor economic policy and the unwillingness of some adults to build careers. A strong finance strategy establishes working places and allows citizens to find opportunities in certain industries. For example, many political articles note that Macedonia has an ineffective monetary system, so their unemployment rate is more than 15%. In addition, some folks are too keen on their own hobbies and therefore simply do not want to work. Some adults simply do not want to be responsible for anything and strain themselves with obligations. For instance, my uncle loved collecting airplane models and decided not to attend a university, so when he turned 25 he could not find work for several months due to his lack of skills in anything. Thus, each state should progressively develop its capital inflow and encourage folks to operate in different spheres of business.
The situation could be improved by constant discussion of this topic in parliament and with regional government officials. Collaboration with foreign countries is vital, as international investments boost creation of new businesses and enterprises. The key focus in this question should be the well-being of local citizens but not the global policy. For example, multiple opportunities were created for Chinese, when nations from the West opened their plants and corporations in Asia. Hense, leadership must constantly act in the interests of their citizens even if it contradicts the diplomatic policy.
Given all of the above, I have identified key problems of unemployment in contemporary society and have proposed an effective solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 7, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...tradicts the diplomatic policy. Given all of the above, I have identified key problems o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44479495268 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04601862403 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662460567823 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.3431433991 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0621925542664 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0194481888365 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359824318488 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0507810520191 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560376467478 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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