Seeking livelihood has become the most challenging issue in today’s world. This essay will first dig deeper into the causes of unemployment at present and brought up some solutions to this pressing problem in our contemporary society.
To begin with, there are various causes of unemployment. One reason is the automation of the manufacturing industry that results in rapid decrease in employment of manpower. As we are living in the technology era, technologists and scientists are pushing back the frontiers of knowledge every day and we have become very good at harnessing technology. As a result, companies these days prefer to take advantage of cutting -edge machinery to achieve higher levels of productivity. For instance, the studies of Oxford university researchers found that automation in the workplace results in a cut down on the number of supervisors and managers, likely because automated processes require less oversight. Another reason for increasing the rate of unemployment is the rising population. In fact, due to the fast pace of population growth, governments are not able to create enough jobs. For example, in India there are more than 100 applicants for every job vacancy.
However, measures must be taken by the government and international bodies to tackle this increasing global concern. The first solution would be enhancing the general understanding of computers by people. As modern technologies inevitably replace human labour, the number of jobs which involve the use of computers and advanced devices increase. Hence, the authorities should provide citizens with adequate knowledge of technology in order that job seekers meet the requirements of new jobs. Secondly, the government should strictly plan to help entrepreneurs to expand their businesses by subsidising or paying them low interest loans. This way the private section will provide job opportunities with the help of the government.
To conclude, although finding a proper job has become a big problem nowadays because of automation and the rapid growth of population, the governments can tackle the problem with educating job applicants and helping employers to expand their activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50295857988 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05472763872 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4611419903 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.411764706 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.080847278176 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0239164365213 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400371894972 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0586847176466 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431012939691 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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