Universities should accept equal number of male and female study in every subject? Do you agree or disagree?
universities would give same level to the women such as they can deserve it more than male.The root can that female must participation in anyone subject in whole life.There are manifold reasons for this.This essay would throw an all the aspects to see things in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue are multiheads.There most predominant it is no doubt girls have very intelligent relate to the boys in every work.For instance,study,communication skills,sence human,talking way,personality development and so on.Therefore some people ponder that female can do it any think in their life but also there plays a vital role in human being life through wife ,daughter ,sister as well as one of the most essential part of life is mother.Otherwise god should trust that mother would second god in their planet.
Nevertheless , there are no denying it is true that women must participation in every subject as far as female have more obligation all the work but also they could choose difference subject in our life .Furthermore, they can select any line in their life.For example ,teacher, doctor,engineer,fashion design and extra. last but not the least female have well education in our life than they do not dependent of family member.All in all they can handle plethora situation in our life-like good and unyielding things.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand my point of view laws should want all the subjects for women life because women is very important part of society.Thus women have full right they will education in our life.on other hand,education is very indispensable part of life.Moreover,female can equal participation in any activities and completing whole work withmale.I think that nation would development day by day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, no doubt, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2304964539 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.53304589769 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570921985816 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.191165733 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 295.0 106.682146367 277% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.4 20.7667163134 272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.8 7.06120827912 493% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119317875451 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071554596235 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0155046274754 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769071055725 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121362838367 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.4 13.0946893788 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.18 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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