Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subjects
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Universities should select male and female students in the fair way. However, I disagree that the number of male and female are the same in every subject.
Firstly, the same number of men and women in every university subject is not reasonable. Depending on hobbies and dreams, every student chooses many different courses. It would be difficult to have the equal proportion of male and female applicants in every courses. In fact, many courses are more popular with one gender than the other. For example, computer courses tend to attract more male applicants, whereas nursing courses is choosen by many females.
Secondly, the selection bases on gender, which do not bring effective. If universities try to select 50 percent each gender in every subject, many students can lose a opportunity and they have to study other subjects which they do not like. Instead of this, universities should select the best candidates, thus both men and women try to study well to follow a course they like. As a result, educational quality is improved and many people can achieve success.
All in all, the selection of universities should not base on gender. It would be unrealistic and ineffective to train young people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07960199005 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66074749613 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577114427861 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4912442569 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5384615385 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264191555492 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103473981773 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096672443304 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186815690723 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130378970915 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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