In the last decade is difficult to imagine Modern Life without the Internet and though it has many benefits, has also caused a lot of problems.
The worldwide use of the internet have been the root cause of several serious problems. First of all, the online technology provides different kinds of unnecessary entertainment for its users. Thousands of adult websites are available for people from different age groups. As a result, many teenagers are addicted to obscene sites which can impacted to their psychological condition and academic performance. To solve this issue, parents should monitor their children's online activities. They should check regularly their children's computer and smartphones and advise them about the serious effect of unsuitable materials. Parents could also make security code for their home internet using, where is some adult websites will be blocked.
Secondly, people do not socialize with surrounding people and are not even aware about the person's living near his apartment. Furthermore, people have less eye to eye conversations with their families and friends. If we do not have any communication with persons nearby, we would face with several problems. Finally, who are addicted to internet are spending a lot of time on computers or smartphones for hours without physical activity which is leading to a lot of health problems. As a solution to this problems, all members of family are not allowed to bring their own devices during Meal Time, therefore there will be a lot of time for eye-to-eye interaction. Besides, I think people should dedicate certain amount of time on internet and use the valuable time to communicate with others or spending on their physical activities.
In conclusion, I would say that use of Internet is changing the lifestyle of the People. However, we should use the Internet in the best way, which in turn will help us be better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ot of health problems. As a solution to this problems, all members of family are not...
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Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple. However, we should use the Internet in the best way, which in turn will help...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15533980583 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78942249776 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559870550162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8248591091 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0284453364355 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0110812470814 0.084324248473 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0194301689198 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0184139746222 0.151304729494 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133262572123 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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