It is true that the universities are provided with a wide range of subjects around the world due to demanding in jobs sectors. However, while some people believe that studying one subject would be better. I disagree with this statement for several reasons, this essay will discuss why students should not concentrate on one particular subject and its effect.
When a nation emphasis on one particular subject instead of other subjects, the nation will face a great crisis in some sector in the future. I do believe that the nation will not fulfil the demand on other job sectors which requires the nation capabilities. In India, for instance, students are studying in the computer science program that may face some great problem in their other sectors such as business, economics, sociology, agriculture. For these reasons, students do not get jobs in their subject.
In additions, pupils are the best architect of the nation. While students choose only a subject that will affect on economic, political and so on it might be not good for national progress. Bangladeshi students, for example, focus on only business studies rather than other subjects so that Bangladesh is not a self-sufficient country around the globe. So, a nation will not be developed until the fulfilment of the educational problem like tendency in a subject.
To conclude, this essay argued that choosing a subject will show a great problem around the worlds and why it is not better for national development in a country. In my opinion, students do not focus on an area that reflects in their future proper what they want to be in their life.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: ravishkazi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...tudents choose only a subject that will affect on economic, political and so on it might ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95955882353 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68980749092 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522058823529 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9314236407 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.769230769 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316943627984 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12258132098 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740578145466 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204780922471 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580047851029 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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