University students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefits the students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that it is necessary to request students to pay all the tuition fee since the college education only benefits themselves, instead of the whole society. I completely disagree with this point of view.
To begin with, universities are always the first places for students to approach the knowledge in specific areas such as Solar System Physics and Polymer Chemistry. By cultivating talents in the universities, governments can see more achievements made in the fields of science and technology. Thus, the society will benefit from a range of development achieved in modern technology. As a result, the living standard and social satisfaction will be improved.
What's more, by increasing the proportion of high-educated people, the country economy will become more knowledge-based. Compared with the repetitive works now increasingly done by machines, innovational sectors like information technology and engineering are requiring more and more skilled workers. In other words, people with a lower educational background may suffer from tons of rejections when they are seeking for jobs. Therefore, sending students into universities is a conducive way to increase the employment rate, and finally may bring out benefits to the economy.
Finally, financial support should be given to students, as many of whom come from undeveloped areas. For students like these, receiving the scholarship from governments or charity groups may be the only opportunity for them to advance from the lower class to the middle class. Therefore, supporting students who need help also contribute to the enlarging of the middle class and thus enhance the social stability.
To sum up, financial aid should be given to college students because they have a positive impact on social stability and technology development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51785714286 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03877786591 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632142857143 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3054986195 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216904666424 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646543259474 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602615509108 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117391565225 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515842355784 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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