Use and throw away is becoming increasingly popular. The government should impose rules to counter this trend. Discuss both views and state your view.
In modern times, everyone is adopting a lifestyle called ‘disposable culture’. The one-use concept is spreading like wildfire, so the Govt should enforce regulations to curtail this fad. This essay will discuss both views before arriving at a rationale conclusion.
On one hand, this throw away culture represents the modern world of ever-growing technology, where people show keen interest in latest inventions, ignoring the environment as it were, perhaps misusing or vandalising it to an extent. One of the main reasons is the convenience of disposing of used articles almost immediately, giving preference to convenience, with no thought for mother earth. To cite an example the common throw away articles include used syringes, tea and coffee cups, computers or even vehicles, however wasteful it may seem. Some of the waste materials emit poisonous gases that could be challenging to mankind, thereby narrowing down the chances of enjoying a healthy life.
On the other hand, this throwaway practice could be curtailed, if the Government could implement fines on miscreants polluting the environment. The main objective of the local bodies should be to ensure that garbage and other disposable items are done away with in a healthy and non-pollutive manner, such that both objectives are met. For example introducing bio-degradable products will not only reduce the over usage of the earth’s resources, but also facilitate healthier and friendlier living conditions. However advantageous it may appear to dispose of waste material almost instantly, mankind should be aware of the hazardous outcome.
Conclusion
To sum up, the earlier this culture is stopped the better it would be for humankind, since it is taking the world to the brink of an imminent energy crisis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the latest'.
Suggestion: in the latest
...nology, where people show keen interest in latest inventions, ignoring the environment as...
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Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...vehicles, however wasteful it may seem. Some of the waste materials emit poisonous gases th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42652329749 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94937871496 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648745519713 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3985717789 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.166666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160130682197 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547196090979 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545050998779 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920996113838 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556558494401 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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