The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Thanks to development of technology, mobile phone seems to become the item that everyone needs to have. While I agree that mobile phone uses are as harmful as smoking in some cases, mobile phone should not be banned in certain places.
overusing mobile phone can lead to many health problems. Firstly, the smart item produces green light which is not good for user’s eyes. According to several statistics, people using mobile phone, especially, smart phone, for a continuously long time are easier to have short-sighted eyes, compared who use less or don’t use. Besides that, stress can be caused by the use of cellphone. it is found that people have less outside activities and sleep less due to mobile phone. Those are two main reasons causing stress these days.
however, the product should not be restricted because there are various benefits. if mobile phone weren’t banned, it would be more difficult for everyone to contact each other, especially, in urgent circumstances. For example, victim of accidents cannot be saved if there is no mobile phone there. Furthermore, mobile phone, nowadays, is used as a helpful for study as well as work. Students can use dictionary application in smart phone when learning languages or transporter also find it easier to find the exact location that they need to go by using e-map.
As mention earlier, the overuse of cellphone possibly causes health problems. However, the advantages of the item in daily activities, it should not be banned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for example, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14634146341 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69270207369 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605691056911 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6530031691 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337785972998 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118492010109 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113479232117 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219132966951 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132263797866 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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