Video games are very popular with children. However, some parents feel that video games can have a negative impact on their children, but others believe that they may have some positive effects. How do you feel about children playing video games? Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Besides televisions, video games are one of the most popular sources of entertainment, especially with children.
Like watching television. playing video games can affect children in both good and bad way.
The benefits of playing video games are absolutely undeniable. One can clearly see that video games are fun and entertaining. Nowadays, video games are no longer limited, they are abundant in all fields. For example, there are games designed for adults and children who enjoyed music but have no chances to obtain their musical instruments. Thanks to these games, players can listen to their favourite songs while playing games. This helps children feel relaxed after a weary day of studying. Video games are not only entertaining but educational as well. Many games are invented to train children in learning. To illustrate this, many video games are simple and they aim to guide children about 3 to 5 years old how to count or write and even learning foreign languages such as English or Chinese. Not only children at kindergarten are the beneficiaries of video games but teenagers as well. When playing video games, players need to move the computer mouse quickly as they have to finish tasks in the game. Therefore, they can improve their reaction to things that happen unexpectedly. Video games are downright helpful for children regardless of gender.
However, video games also pose risks to children due to their drawbacks. Playing video games too much can lead to various health problems, and they especially have atrocious effects on children's eyes. Some children may even addict to the games and thereby, have to suffer from mental illnesses. Some can develop hallucinations and even attempt to kill people for fear of being harmed, which are only their illusion. In addition, they have a tendency to avoid social communication which means they are timid and rarely talk, even with their friends or family members. Consequently, children isolate themselves from society and they will feel lonely and sorrowful for most of their life. More severely, children who spend most of their time playing video games without exploring the world may have to suffer from autism. In a word, video games hazardously affect its players if they do nothing but stick their eyes to the screens of computers or televisions to play games.
Video games have both positive and negative influences on children. People can neither boycott video games because of their disadvantages nor encourage playing video games for a long time for the reason that games are helpful. Parents should allow their children to play video games for a specific time, about 1 hour per day is sufficient, to make the best use of video games.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Playing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2272.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 446.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09417040359 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59415005554 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520179372197 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1626694397 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1481481481 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5185185185 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18518518519 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.619351784339 0.244688304435 253% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201280835025 0.084324248473 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939201163908 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.378394018451 0.151304729494 250% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988681479397 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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