Violence among school students seems to be increasing. Write a paragraph to suggest what should be done to help solve this problem
Nowadays, there has been an upsurge in the popularity of violence among students, which is a serious problem requiring a lot of effort to address. My following essay will discuss about some productive methods to solve this issue.
First and foremost, it is crucial to foster a nurturing and caring studying environment for students. Initially, teachers need to make great effort to promote mutual trust and understanding and solidarity among students and between teachers and students. This is likely to diminish the possibility of creating conflicts at times when differing opinions collide and build a long term rapport among pupils and teachers.
In addition to that, providing emotional support for students is also considered as the most momentous measure. There is no denying that pupils especially adolescents have to go through a tough period in which they build up their self esteem and have to face up to many problems with their emotion, their peers, and their parents. Therefore, teachers and students should take full advantage of weekly discussions or psychological counseling room to express their feelings, their social difficulties and learning ways to cope with these matters.
Last but not least, another noteworthy point is that media need to cut down on the numbers of violent programs which definitely exert negative impact on the cognitive development of students. They find it so interesting to imitate the actors and the athletes. Therefore, educational and entertaining TV shows should be catered for youngsters in preference to numerous violent sports and actions films, which is likely to have positive influence on their personality.
To sum up, I believe the whole society need to take proactive measures to tackle this issue as soon as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83827315055 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645390070922 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2711398319 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125997721029 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402391786407 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308010083499 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636009361006 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314645704353 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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