In this contemporary world, media just like water and air has become a indispensable part of human beings, especially among youngsters. There is widespread worry that the violence in the media is promoting violence in the society. I do entirely accept this statement and I will explain why in the following paragraphs.
There are a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that, there has been a soaring upsurge in the field of media in the recent decades, allowing one individual to share ideas and communicate with people all around the world. As the media increased, films and programs that display violence also increased with them to increase the viewership. These violence behaviors are easily imitated by those who are watching this. For example, a youngster will easily equip and imitate these behaviors in his life and display it in the school causing trouble.
Another overt facet of my argument is that, with the development of electronic media through computers, mobile phones, and so on has developed a behavior of cyberbullying. Cyberbullying or cyberharassment is a form of bullying or harassment using electronic means and it is serious offence. It has become increasingly common, especially among teenagers, as the digital sphere has expanded and technology has advanced.
In view of the arguments mentioned above, one can conclude that the effect of media's role in developing violence in an individual is indeed to dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...edia just like water and air has become a indispensable part of human beings, esp...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...he following paragraphs. There are a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17842323651 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99724108834 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593360995851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7375941507 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190841030518 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738457086 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105533262781 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117201665473 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720297838833 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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