These days it has became a growing trend to see people mixing their private life with professional life. In my opinion, it is advisable not to engage your personal life with your profession as it contains many pros and cons. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate this topic and explains the benefits and drawbacks of doing so.
To commence with, there are some benefits in mixing your private life with your work life. The most conspicuous one is that, introducing this trend in the work place will make it easier for the workers to communicate with each other more thoroughly. They can share ideas and knowledge of projects along with personal issues and help each other resolve it. And also if you are having a troublesome day they will be there for you. However, some personal space have to be kept.
On the other hand, there are a lot of negative effects to it as well. People will engage in chit chats in the middle of work, this result in less work efficiency and will waste a lot of the company's time. Many companies have rules against workplace relationships and hiring their employee’s significant other. Another preponderant fact is that, conflicts and quarrels will soar between employees which will not create a good workplace environment.
From what has been discussed above, one can conclude that drawbacks of mixing private and professional life are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
These days it has became a growing trend to see people mixing th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90376569038 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60340497751 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585774058577 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5753507095 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1538461538 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220210067974 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758106419175 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118155422437 0.071462118173 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156762577553 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103579053434 0.0609392437508 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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