Violent TV shows and aggressive video games should be banned on governmental level do you agree or disagree.
In contemprary era, violence as well as aggressive videos increasing day by day on television which should be restricted by level of authorities. There are many several reason behind this problem. I completely agree with aforementioned statement. Besides, also I am given reasons, remedies as well as solution of this issue.
To commence with, in modern epoch, everyone want to be luxurious things according to their regular income, if he does not achieve these things through regular income, then individual are begin to do crime as well as choose to wrong way, which do not good for their future and life. In addition to, TV shows also creates violence in great level like shows of weapons video games which are not beneficial for kids as well as adults. For intance, there are many popular games like Pubg which attract to the people, such as kids younger as well as adults. All age groups of people addicted by this game.
Moreover, many television shows are very harmful for alternative. It also effect on their behaviour, due to the fact that, adopted bad manners such as angry, aggressive tone, bad as well as loud speak with elders. Because they copy their ideal as a result kids as well as a youngster prefer to see action movies which are related to weapon and guns extra. Due to their try to do crimes such as murder, raps, drugs as well as theft extra.
On the other hand, there are some steps to reducing this circumstance, First and formost; parents also checked their children's activity and also guide them for avoid these kind of games as well as shows. Apart from that, government also should be prohibited bloodshed and aggressive programs which broadcast on TV. along with this lawmaker also started programs to awareness against violence shows video games and so on.
To put in a nutshell, individuals are affected by TV programs as well as video games while if alternative and authorities work together that this circumstances slowly reduced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: begun
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Suggestion: than
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Suggestion: effects
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, apart from, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88059701493 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56296080731 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555223880597 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5283217307 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204336025564 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694862470362 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625071042861 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117719180947 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397042993342 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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