In modern era of living, TV and mobile phones are major source of entertainment for all people irrespective of ages. Some people may argue that the government should not approve this kind of shows and games to be telecasted and available for playing. In my opinion the violent series and apps should be banned from using the reasons are stated in essay.
First of all, younger generation are really becoming an addict to games, furthermore if they all start to play the games or apps that has violent content can cause a serious negative impact. Kids tend to learn a lot from what they do in their day to day life, if they started using these applications then children become very furious and mood will be in a disturbed manner. For instance younger one is playing a lot of games today then their mood will be very aggressive and can feel frustrated for every small thing.
Not only kids but also elder people who love to watch TV programs can be influenced by them. For example we have completed seeing a clash between two people in a show then all our thoughts will be in a aggressive mode so even a little disturbance can cause a big fight in that scenario. After viewing all these programs our mood will be fluctuated a lot and can cause inconvenience for people living with us.
To conclude, Government should take actions to remove aggressive shows and games on TV and phones respectively. Because they are showing negative impact on the people who are watching.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a disturbed manner" with adverb for "disturbed"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Consider replacing "in a aggressive mode" with adverb for "aggressive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...in a show then all our thoughts will be in a aggressive mode so even a little disturbance can cause ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a show then all our thoughts will be in a aggressive mode so even a little distur...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd games on TV and phones respectively. Because they are showing negative impact on the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, then, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68199233716 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53212938411 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570881226054 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9924764941 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.090909091 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214494033894 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092072949843 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611463687367 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147987385217 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534692052781 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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