Generally, pollution is defined as the disturbance in balance and in original form. There are many sorts of pollution, like Air pollution, water pollution, soil pollution,sound pollution,visual pollution and so on. In addition visual pollution is considered with eyes and vision. These days the many accident cases are increased in unexpected rate .Many people claims that,visual pollution is also a main reason behind this increasing problem.I partially agree with this statement because of three different reasons ie. carelessness during driving, lack of proper knowledge about traffic rules and presence of dust and dust like particles in road.
To start with, now a days we are hearing the news of life taking serious road accidents.later on, we got to know that this incident happened because of carelessness of driver or driver was drunk.For an instance, few days ago I nearly meet with an accident while going to home from office.I was driving my car on my side but suddenly three or four bikes passed so fast and u know one bike came near of my car in a uncontrolled way. Somehow I managed my car and me from this accident.
In other hand,we can see specially young and old people are crossing roads beside the zebra crossing area this is due to lack of knowledge about traffic rules and regulations. Not only young and older persons even youth students also cross road by here and there. For an example, a recent survey about road accidents taken by our Nepalese government shows that,lack of knowledge about traffic rules on general public is main responsible factor for road accidents.
Ultimately, on the roads of busy and high populated big cities like Kathmandu, Pokhara, Dharan Birgunj and Nepalgunj there is presence of dusty particles in excessive amount which crates problem on vision for drivers. As a result it leads on accident . Specially in winter season the proportion of road accidents increases due to the presence of smog n fug. Consider a example,In Nepalgunj city maximum road accidents happen in winter season because of unclear and blur vision.
To sum up, only visual pollution is not only one responsible factor for road accidents. There are also other factors which are enhancing such problems so it is not appropriate to blame on one factor because all factors are equally important for high rate of road accidents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in addition, as a result, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0358974359 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78146838001 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55641025641 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.2071354782 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.75 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.081877800572 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369040676302 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389049691587 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0451574245086 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324034551317 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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