As well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many opinions have been given out about whether or not, a business should also concentrate on being responsible to the society and also the human life. In my point of view, I totally agree with this statement as being well socially behaviours is one of the must-have objective that a business should has. Having social responsibilities at this time is understandable as most business use materials from the environment and it also brings each business plenty advantages
The social responsibilities is now required for each business as they use the materials directly from the environment. What they are doing may put a massive effect on the earth and also on the human being. So putting this as a priority objectives is understandable. Businesess today use materials mostly from the enviroment and the more they abuse it the more impacts our world gain. The rate of polution has been increased for a past few years and will be increasing more in about 2 years time. For example, SHELL, an extracting oil business has causing sea polution few years ago. Although it brings the benefits to the finance but it will put a huge affect on the earth. Therefore, the requirements for social responsibilities for business is so important for our world.
Secondly, the benefits gaining from the responsibles to the society is one of the reasons why a business should consider about having social responsibilities. A business may gian more reputation from their customers. The reputation gained can help them to increase their profit and expand their market share. And by having social resposibilities, they can avoid the social problems with their customers and other local residents. Therefore, they can get rid of the potential of getting customers boycott and protest form other human-being.
Although it is undeniable that profit is what the most important objective for a business, well behaviours to the society can help the business gain plenty benefits and also protecting the earth from self-destruction, showing why this is a necessary and also an important factor to lead to the success of a business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...Many opinions have been given out about whether or not, a business should also concentrate on ...
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Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...t-have objective that a business should has. Having social responsibilities at this...
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Line 2, column 655, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...s to the finance but it will put a huge affect on the earth. Therefore, the requirements ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08959537572 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07290679807 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488439306358 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5876837256 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0625 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253845742618 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807256610462 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750818965044 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163373910076 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787193672919 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.