As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that along with generating revenues, enterprises also need to have public responsibilities. I totally agree with this idea.
There are a variety of reasons why a business’s efforts to make a profit are beneficial to society in some ways. Firstly, tax revenues account for a large proportion of the national budget. If the profits of companies increase, they will have to pay more taxes to a state budget, which may allow the government to spend more money on providing public services like education or public transportation. Secondly, when firms maximize profits, they have the opportunity to expand their business. As a result, more jobs can be created and the unemployment rate may be reduced.
There are some reasons why companies should embrace their social responsibilites. The first reason is that their activities may have negative impacts on the enviroment. For example, the emission of pollutants from industry is a major cause of air pollution, which can harm public health and damage the enviroment. If they switch to fuels that result in less harmful emissions such as natural gas, the air pollution level can be controlled. Furthermore, social responsibilities give businessess a good reputation. This may let them attract more customers, which will raise their revenues in the future.
In conclusion, I believe that companies not only focus on making money but also have social responsibilities.
- Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.Do you agree or disagree? 56
- As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'fuel'.
Suggestion: fuel
...amage the enviroment. If they switch to fuels that result in less harmful emissions s...
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Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...give businessess a good reputation. This may let them attract more customers, whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31578947368 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17835719319 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622807017544 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The sentence length is short
Sentence length SD: 39.9776085287 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5714285714 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188492357679 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06678265866 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906769772946 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162290573481 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119150788668 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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