As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
Whether corporations should have public responsibilities remains controversial. I completely agree that besides making profit, they should conduct their businesses at a social level.
On the one hand, companies need to make money to survive in a competitive and rapidly-changing world. They need to make money to maintain their running, including paying for workers, building and equipment. The more large the organization wishes to be, the more money it needs to operate normally and effectively. Moreover, they need to adapt to a competitive world with rapid changes every day. It is demanding to take notice of social obligations while they are unable to cover their running costs.
On the other hand, social responsibilities should be paid attention to by businesses. Without control, because of maximizing profit, production manufacturing can lead to some serious environmental problems such as global warming coming from carbon dioxide emissions and serious forest degrading. For example, while cutting down trees for production, they can launch a campaign to plan new trees, which maintains biodiversity. Moreover, enterprises should give a hand to less fortunate people by giving scholarships and donations.
In conclusion, while I strongly believe that making profit is the fundamental principle to maintain businesses, public obligations should play as an important role as money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whether corporations should have public respons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66985645933 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2267468652 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665071770335 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1692824192 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165223573194 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633532302814 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577814203568 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108655266227 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712690842563 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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