As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that the most concern to enterprises is making profits. Therefore, many accept that businesses have to make money, I believe that they also should have social responsibilities.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why enterprises need to concern making profits. One reason is that if a company make more money, they will have to pay more taxes for the government. As a result, the government might use these taxes on sociability activities. For example, the government will use these amount of money to build schools or hospitals for the elderly people. Furthermore, when a company earns more money, that company will more and more develop and expand. For this reason, there will have more labours who are employed by that business, helping them earn a living and feed on their family.
On the other hand, besides making profits, businesses have operated responsibility to address social and environmental issues. Firstly, emission from factories is a main factor in harming the environment. Without controls, production processes may result in serious problems to the surrounding environment. For example, enterprises could installed waste treating system, instead of emitting wastes into rivers. Secondly, businesses that make profits also should donate money to communities through charity. For instance, many big businesses use partly profits which they earn by selling products to do this. As a result, it will help boost brand values for that companies.
In conclusion, is is certainly true that making moneys is indispensable factor of businesses, but I believe that all businesses also concern about social responsibilities.
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Suggestion: instal; install
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38697318008 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97499154833 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0905125237 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.875 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278278141145 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954217579911 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117432078788 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228801964677 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106903865811 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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