As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is the social responsibility of every business to work towards the improvement of quality of life of its workforce and society. Earning profits should not be the only motive of any organization. I completely agree with the given statement.
Firstly, every organisation work towards a common goal of earning income. They work towards the goal of increasing their stakeholder’ networth. Stakeholders are the people who have some interests in the trade. It defines as all people including shareholders, creditors, debtors, and many more. All these people are interested in the trade and look for the higher returns on their investments from the company. For instance, if I would invest in the shares of any company, I would expect the rise in the value of my shares. Secondly, The companies which focus merely on the money do not earn a good reputation in the eyes of the community. Finally, companies who have a good reputation in the eyes of their group or community can survive in the long run.
Moreover, the Indian government has also imposed mandatory guidelines related to the corporate social responsibility to every organisation. Additionally, it is the duty of every business to show the transparency and accountability towards the people interested in the trade by presenting correct financial status. For example, in the past, there have been many scandals, which caused harm to the economy. To fix the loopholes in the laws, many amendments have been introduced and authorities work stringently towards following those rules.
To conclude, I would say that every business is accountable for its society. The sole purpose of companies should not be earning profits only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20512820513 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04719196078 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3439660089 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5882352941 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12901165522 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038931897611 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420670152702 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803050293243 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387521476826 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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