What are the advantages and disadvantages of mass media?
A little retrospection would reveal and history has witnessed that mass media is ubiquitous in this present era. In this essay, I will discuss both merits and demerits of this phenomenon.
To embark with, numerous benefits are associated to the electronic media. The most prominent is, it is good source of knowledge as there is ample cognitive content is available on the media which explore our horizons. What is more, undoubtedly, people are rooted to their routines due to this they have no time to spend their precious time with family members, consequently, they can able to communicate with their near and dear ones. For instance, Facebook , a social app give opportunities to common individual to connect with their family members as well as friends.
Nevertheless, every moon has its dark side, so, mass media also have few drawbacks. The first and foremost is, multitudes become a victim of isolation as they likely to spend more and more time on watching movies and surf on internet which led to individualism. Needless to say, inhabitants also sacrifice their sleeping hours with their working hours as people can work in their homes with the help of mass media due to this they also faces so many health issues such as, eye strain, social withdrawal or stress. Thus, mass media has bad impacts on society.
To conclude, I firmly believe, mass media play a crucial role in modern era which has lots of benefits to common people. However, it also has few drawbacks which are unavoidable.
- Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 72
- Today, the economical gap between the rich and poor is widening. What do you believe are the reasons for this? What can be done to prevent this from happening? 72
- Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model of youngsters. Do you support it or not? 77
- Crime is increasing at an alarming rate What are the causes and solutions of this 46
- What are the advantages and disadvantages of mass media? 55
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67012738632 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616600790514 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7067437337 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179748678921 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769619319964 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717247085864 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108234909664 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262792566431 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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