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What are the positive and negative impact of advertisements? What is your opinion about the advertisements and how can it be improved?
Advertisements are key part of the business. It help companies to let their consumer or customer know about their product and their features. An advertisement is healthy as far as it talks about the true features of the product and does not influence people to consume products which are harmful to them. Their are both positive and negative impacts which are discussed below.
Looking at the positive part, advertisements tell us about the products or the choices available in the market. Further more it creates a competitive market and helps the products price to be nominally priced. Secondly,...
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It help companies
It helps companies
Their are both positive and negative impacts
There are both positive and negative impacts
advertisement persuade us to buy thing even if we don't need them and making us to overspend
advertisements persuade us to buy things even if we don't need them and make us to overspend
and get use to such harmful products.
and get used to such harmful products.
Sentence: Further more it creates a competitive market and helps the products price to be nominally priced.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to products and price
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Don't need to put a lot of reasons in one paragraph. One reason is enough. Try this pattern at essay body:
Para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree.
Para 2: First,reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences) + examples for reason 1 (around 2 sentences) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences).
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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Words: 264 350
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No. of Different Words: 145 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.031 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.155 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.922 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 101 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.857 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.218 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.35 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.579 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.197 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5