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antages of mobile.
In this modern era, most of the population of the world is bombarded with the technology, which is booming by leaps and bounds and maximum number of people spend their most time to using it. This essay will narrate the merits and demerits of the using mobile in further paragraph.
On the one hand ,humans are used to with the mobile phone : children, younger, older individuals. There are some advantages of mobile using, one of the advantages is mankind can carry the phone with them anywhere, use it anytime it helps people in many ways such as to use social media applications, read books, chat with others also use as a television to watch movies for an instance, when they feel bore at that time people are using mobile to get an entertainment. Furthermore, students can learn their academic lessons through the android mobile phone at anytime anywhere. So these are the benefits of mobile.
On the other hand , there are some disadvantages : firsts one is it affects physically - effects eyes ; as well as mentally - radiations effect the mind. People are become lazy children are becoming go astray and disobeying also spent more times to play mobile games rather than study, watch adult videos and do some crime. Not only effects physically, mentally but also birds for an example, due to radiation of mobile towers in India, many sparrows die out and decrease the number of birds.
To recapitulate, mobile has advantages - it makes life easier compared to the past also disadvantages - affects the mind, eyes and birds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93410852713 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60933943169 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608527131783 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.0117638918 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.3 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0894370599136 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396233584691 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027037390444 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054768742549 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146765602448 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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