What is the cause and solution to global warming
It is undoubtedly true that the world's temperature is increasing significantly and becoming nerve-racking issues not only for the government but also for the people throughout the world. This tendency resulted from several causes. Luckily, some actions can be taken up to solve these hassles
On the one hand, there is a variety of explanations for global warming. First of all is the greenhouse effect. It appears to be some shreds of evidence that gases in the atmosphere trapped heat just like the glass roof of a greenhouse. Carbon dioxide, which came from burning fossil fuels such as charcoal or oil, is a good case in point. Secondly, there is deforestation. In many countries, especially the impoverished one, trees are being cut down with the aim of meet the demand for wood supplies for numerous industries including paper or furniture. IT is released a great deal of carbon into the environment which is indirectly causing the temperature change. Furthermore, garbage combustion and emissions discharging from manufactures have accelerated this progress
Nevertheless, a lot of measures could be taken to tackle this problem. The first solution is to raise awareness among the population through education and media. By way of illustration, making global warming a compulsory subject in the curriculum. In the second place, the government should enforce a law on environment protection. It will form a legal corridor to sentence the act of increasing the earth's temperature. Moreover, the Industries that are certified green should be charged a lower tax rate as an encouragement. Apart from the government, every individual member of society should step forward and play their roles. Using public transport may be a good way to bring down the exhaust fumes. On the other hand, choosing eco-friendly products can make our plant a better place
To summarize, global warming is caused by the greenhouse effect or deforestation and this process is accelerated by burning waste and emissions. However, the governments can take up some measures as enforcing a law, raising public awareness or reducing taxes for the green industries. About individual, they can using public transport or environmental friendly products
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Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, apart from, such as, first of all, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32011331445 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09132010332 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609065155807 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8935162865 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1116318614 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285931742563 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563462176318 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631970330196 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449794048576 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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