What do you think you, what is the most important in our life career or marriage??? Write in this essay advantage and disadvantage or your opinion.
In the salad day, we can see it the current scenario which gives more importance to two things like marriage and career. However, there are both views pros and cons of marriage life and making career. The following paragraph would highlight my personal perspective along with an apt example.
I see eye to eye with the central idea for various reasons. First and foremost career plays the most important role in our day-to-day life. Nowadays some people have good job and business also, but some people are jobless. Moreover, people work in interesting field which they like and make their goals in their life. Some of the person is only focusing on the career and they work hard in working time and they do not look about time and situation, so i would like to cite an example of Apple company's owner whose name is Steven jobs. He was focusing on his career and forgot his family members when he was working in company. He targeted his goal after some years he got success in his life and he become famous and great person.
In conclusion, I personally believe that merits outnumber the demerits, however efforts should be made to minimize the latter one. We should focus on career and achieve our goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68075117371 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26867945686 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643192488263 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6339871846 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0833333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118726740587 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480174571751 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536589133589 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793695458093 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263124403601 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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