What kind of punishment should be given to children who commit crime? Some people believe that children should be punished in the same way as adults.
Do you agree or disagree?
People have different perceptions towards the punishments for young children who commit serious crimes. Whether these underage criminals should be punished in the same way as adults when both of them do resemble crimes has become a controversial issue in the society today. However, in my view, I strongly disagree with this suggestion.
On the one hand, it cannot be denied that the rate of criminal cases committed by young offenders is alarmingly increasing day by day. Therefore, some people advocate the fact that youngsters who commit severe crimes such as robbery, violent attacks or murders should be penalized with the same punishments as adults in order to deter them from commit harsh criminals again. In addition, as a positive result, it also helps creating safer and more peaceful society.
On the other hand, the most compelling reason for holding to my view is that children are generally not mature enough to realize whether their actions are legal or illegal. Therefore, I assert the view that it is unfair for children if the authorities impose similar penalties to them instead of having lenient punishments such as education or renovation at the vocational training programs. What is more, young offender deserve to be given time to reflect themselves, their actions as well as to restart their lives with better ways. As such, they should be punished mild penalties like participating in social and community works as volunteers to a certain amount of time.
In conclusion, although some people claim that young criminals should be penalized as senior citizens, I believe that there are other alternative ways of punishments which can create “win-win” situation for both children and society as I mentioned above. After all, given this situation, it is recommended that the policy makers around the world should take into account about implementing this form of punishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to create' or 'create'.
Suggestion: to create; create
...on, as a positive result, it also helps creating safer and more peaceful society. On...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, well, after all, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view, what is more, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24509803922 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76937020593 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604575163399 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.661948333 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.75 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9166666667 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421027951028 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130429660151 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985461907509 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253030256351 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067484391634 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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