When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Regards to some people opinion, the salary is the main thing for choosing a job. Personally I consent with this idea to extent, however consideration of other aspects is important.
It is not denied that the material things play the key role in our lives. In the modern world where the economy issues are widespread day by day, it is necessary to consider the financial costs such as medicine, food, accommodation, education and etc. The local immigration rate statistics show that a lot of potential employees moved to foreign countries in order to searched the job with high salaries. Also, it is obvious that the high income can increase the social status and self-esteem and bring the fortune for other family member of employee.
On the other hand, having said that, salary cannot be the only consideration when choosing an occupation. Career satisfaction is also important, in addition, the work hours should be reasonable. Choosing the relevant job, it should be considered the work environment, the location, motivational actions provided by employers. Considered above listed aspects satisfaction of job is not only related with money.
To conclude, the high income should be the first thing to consider when choosing a job because it is impossible to lead a comfortable life without a salary. However, the money alone cannot make people satisfied.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 243, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...edicine, food, accommodation, education and etc. The local immigration rate statistics s...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16742081448 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88794856666 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619909502262 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3997734693 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164232018127 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581298989076 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612602468094 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107648835069 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605844939897 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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