When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree
some individual's believes that the salary plays indispensible role in selecting jobs.This essay will delve deeper into a matter further and reach to a logical conclusion in the end
to begin with,indeed it is true that having good salary is crucial there are many reasons why people electing job on the basis of salary for example high payed employe can easily afford a luxery life style while it also assist them to secure their adolescent future these are some reasons why masses running behind well payed jobs by secrificing their satisfaction.Moreover in this mordern era individual cannot spend a comfort life without good salary for example nowadays prices of daily houshold stuffs increasing day by day not salary so before doing any job individual twice think of his monthly expenditure and then he see salary he will only then he decides he have to do or not.
On the other hand , there are many multitudes who opt the job on the basis of their self satisfaction instead of thinking about salary for instance if any person loves to do field work then he will not feel comforttable with desk job because they want to do what they enjoy to do rather then taking tension of salary
In conclusion, every individual wants to fulfil there family needs so that they are in search of superior salary although the prices of groceries and other stuffs uprising every day in addition to that people giving more priority to high payed salary so they not face any complication
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80708661417 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63005431461 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602362204724 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 127.0 20.2975951904 626% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.5 49.4020404114 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 610.5 106.682146367 572% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 127.0 20.7667163134 612% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 71.0 7.06120827912 1005% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163508380883 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13602840855 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0119283169349 0.0667982634062 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942501353214 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583367650827 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 64.7 13.0946893788 494% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -57.43 50.2224549098 -114% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 52.8 11.3001002004 467% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.8 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.29 8.58950901804 155% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 52.8 10.1190380762 522% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 10.7795591182 492% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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