Nowadays, childcare become major concern in this modern era. In addition to that childcare is the probably most indispensable thing of the society for this all parent should be required to take childcare training course. This essay will delve deeper into matter further and reach to a logical conclusion in the end.
To begin with, when it comes to nursing a child no one can do superior than parent they can do it very well without any tips and training and it can be seen in many ways such as, they treat and nourish there child with full of love, affection and care for instance they pass on all good things and habit to there child and it really plays a crucial role in development of child. Moreover, there is no any acquire learn these things from anywhere this is natural and god gift of nourishing there adolescent. for example there are many research which proves that a mother without any training take care very well from whom who takes training of it and instead of wasting time in any type of child caring course they should teach something new to there child.
On the hand hand, child training courses are to expensive not every couple can afford it without a good source source of income rather then wasting money on child training they should provide some more amenities to their adolescent. However in case if mother need any tip associated to nursing of they can easily take a help of internet for example You tube, google and many other and a natural care of mother makes child over the moon as well as for mother taking care out there child is just a piece of cake.
In conclusion, I reckon there are not any training source which can teach to a mother how to take care of their child and in the end I totally disagree with suggestion of training to childcare center.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, so, then, well, as for, for example, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52777777778 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25323650777 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506172839506 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.8593641941 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.0 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.1111111111 7.06120827912 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297826301594 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134731253597 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118513139125 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199184046336 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343317021924 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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