Nowadays many people seeking their job based on the salary instead of other benefits they can get. This essay will discuss importance of money in carrier and support them with examples.
Work is the place, where we spend most of the time in our lives. Most importantly it is source of resources for our living. We need a job to cover all expenses, from essential things such as paying bills, grocery to pleasure such as vacation, entertainment and many others. It is obvious that people seeking job which they fancy and also gives them enough money to cover their needs. However, many people see just a money and putting aside their wellbeing. For example, nurses and other health professionals move to Middle East, where their salary exceeding dramatically their payroll back home. These individuals entry differently oriented religion country, where normal human rights are put aside, in vision to be paid better. It is proved by scientist that these group of people is more likely experiencing burn out syndrome.
Although, finance is important aspect for everybody, having joy or feeling satisfaction from work is important for mental health. For example, if I have a job, where employee is completely stressful, working excessive amount of hours and coming home exhausted, he will not be able to have a joy from his earnings. Some people may argue, that weekend is the best way to relax, however, two days are not enough for individuals working twelve or more hours five days a week in stress environment.
To conclude, I believe in importance of money while choosing job, but, people should reconsider what consequences decision made because of the money might cause.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 603, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...atically their payroll back home. These individuals entry differently oriented religion cou...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
...e in importance of money while choosing job, but, people should reconsider what con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05395683453 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60945129565 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63309352518 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6135026454 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.357142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125746508623 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450412008765 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423190393151 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881489862624 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342944269072 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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