The introduction of computer in the end of nineteenth century is a landmark for mankind by changing the way people work and interact with each others. Although much debate claim that computer might have made people less happy and more stupid, I am the opinion that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. I believe that computer helps people becoming more creative and more productive in doing their daily work and will explain the points in the following essay.
First of all, the use of computer assist people in doing all kind of calculation in much faster way and precisely. This unique aspect of a computer allow user to get rid of the ordinary repetitive work and focus on creative and productive work. For example, in the 1950s accountant have to do the calculation and report mainly on actual paper. This long and harsh processes taking up most of their time, therefore they could not have free time to conduct intricate work. However, with computer and sofware such as Exel, accountant nowadays could finished their task rather easy and spend the spare time concentrating on creative task.
Secondly, a computer also help people to access information faster and more accurate. By being conntected to the internet, computer user could get access to all sort of database and retrieve the information that they wanted. For instance, student study in university could stay at home and still able to get the relevant data on the subject of their interest rather easy. In addition, they could also verify the integrity of the information by cross-checking various sources that widely available in the internet. This allows student to be more informative in doing their research.
In conclusion, the advent of technology, in this case, the introduction of computer has brought great advantages to people by providing them the ability to do their work precisely and creatively while still maintaning the accuracy and integrity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 547, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'finish'
Suggestion: finish
...such as Exel, accountant nowadays could finished their task rather easy and spend the sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12302839117 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72776373637 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533123028391 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7135964854 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9285714286 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158139251151 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597006691363 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366484503296 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988927019465 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385439530557 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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