When a country develop its technology, traditional skills and way of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive do you agree, disagree
it is a common belief that the government ought to invest more money in conducting medical research with a view to protecting the health of city dwellers rather than in conserving the environment. However, I firmly disagree with this idea as it is a waste of money when carrying on a medical study to protect citizens’ health, and people can avoid serious diseases thanks to better environmental protection. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view and give supporting reasons
To begin with, when the governments spend more money on saving the environment, citizens possibly evade some life-threatening diseases. this is because the environment is around individuals all the time, so human well-being relies heavily on it. Unless the environment is negatively affected, humans will be less likely to suffer from severe diseases which may even take medical researchers many years to find the treatment for such diseases. For example, the Covid-19 pandemic would be prevented if bats in China were rigorously controlled. Thus, using money with the focus of protecting the environment should be a priority in order to minimize the risks of getting dangerous diseases from wild animals
On top of that, medical research may cost the governments large sums of money. In detail, medical research probably requires multiple complicated instruments such as optical and electron microscopes and laboratory space to house all of such equipment, hence money spent on medical research might be three times higher than that of protecting the environment. One study, for example, shows that the amount of money allocated for the Covid-19 in terms of vaccine research exponentially increased, moving from 4 million usd in 2019 to 16 million usd in 2020. this proof, therefore, proves that governments have been squandering money since Covid-19 is yet totally cured.
To sum up, spending more money on protecting the environment can help people elude serious diseases and assist governments in reducing costs in favor of saving the environment. For this reason, conserving the environment should be the governments’ primary goal in an attempt to protect citizen’s health
- The government should spend more money on medical research to protect citizens health rather than on protecting the environment Do you agree or disagree 78
- When a country develop its technology traditional skills and way of life die out It is pointless to try and keep them alive do you agree disagree 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37101449275 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98286924398 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573913043478 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7604001261 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.416666667 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0232680881157 0.244688304435 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0105019504569 0.084324248473 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0185920811253 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0151958300268 0.151304729494 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152632119395 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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