When design a building, the most important factor is tended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are some different views about whether a function or an outlook of building is the most important factor when designing. While I think the function of building plays a vital role, I agree with the view that the outward appearance is equally important in some extent.
On the one hand, it is true that many buildings which have especial functions need to focus on how to use it most effectively when design these buildings. The main argument is that the investors want to maximize the use which others building can not perform well. It is exemplified by the schools, architect designs the building with many similar and consecutive rooms into a row, and it has a large yard where students have a chance to enjoy recreational activities. Another special building is the bank, for instance, a large building where exchange and store money should to be designed solidly and have many security classes to maximize the safety.
On the other hand, apart from purpose of use, the appearance of building is very necessary. To begin with citizens’ demand, they have a right to live or work in beautiful buildings. Thanks to this, residents might feel comfortable in their house and their productivity would be enhanced in wonder workplace. Additionally, a city which has same design buildings always attract tourists because of their significant outlook. This leads to the fact that not only would tourism in this city be developed but also create more and more job opportunity to local people. Hoi An ancient town in Vietnam is an example, this town become the top of famous city tourism by typical architecture with yellow walls and wooden pillars.
In conclusion, while I believe the uses of building is important, I would deny the necessary of outward appearance of buildings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'designed'.
Suggestion: designed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, i think, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99665551839 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74212005209 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57525083612 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5127474911 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.923076923 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196010973691 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723970018048 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608973592799 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128473861276 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640759467343 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.