When families have a meal together it is considered social activity. Do you think eating together is important to people in your country?
Nowadays people from different ethnic would prefer to be in diverse gathering, such as eating together. This popular sense probable refer to social ability of men. Although in my country people due to this fact that they have not enough time, they also would like to have meal with each other, as reason in IRAN, holidays are so important for people and they usually make a gathering in this days.
In my country usually people engage in social activity and overcome their initial needs, so that they always are busy spending enough time to each other, and some time people could not see their close relatives until one month, regardless of all have been said, people usually prefer gathering with their family specially than living alone. At reason in IRAN, always holidays are significant for people and they look for a leisure time to spend with their relatives. For example my mother extended family approximately all two weeks plan a program to gather all family and spend dinner or launch with each other.
In addition of holidays among a week also people try to have a relation with others. Sometime Residents of an apartment arrange to have a middle-eat with each other. This fact usually happen in afternoon and when all resident have been arrived.
A Third kind of eating together exist that is more common in IRAN. Nuclear families in IRAN, try to have at least one meal with each other. this small gathering normally happen every night when all members of family are in home and they could have a great time with each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 388, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...le and they usually make a gathering in this days. In my country usually people eng...
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Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
...rcome their initial needs, so that they always are busy spending enough time to each other...
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Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...month, regardless of all have been said, people usually prefer gathering with the...
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Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... dinner or launch with each other. In addition of holidays among a week also people tr...
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Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...have at least one meal with each other. this small gathering normally happen every n...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, third, at least, for example, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77528089888 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21391720555 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50936329588 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.5114858929 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20615908564 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838374032894 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034871209615 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13922794805 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286263544371 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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