When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks and sports facilities, rather than shopping centres for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Alterations are law of the nature. Many expert's claim that when constructors planning any new town they give priority to include gardens and sports Center's that are open for citizen's who lives around, while others believe that shopping centre must be included in his plans. I partially agree with this statement, some fact that are support to my view I will written in subsequent paragraphs
To begin with, it is proven that parks and sports Center are close to our health. Majority of people go park to released their stress, however they are join sports center to brush up their skills. For example, in many countries people get name and fame by visiting these buildings and they are create new record's. Thus park and sports center are more beneficial places for human because with the help of these buildings they can improve our stamina and reduce their Manortony
On the other hand,well nobody able to produce everything as they need in their life so they are buying the these items from nearest store. Moreover the shopping centres provide verity of things in underneath the single roof. For instance, in some nation's many people believe that shopping centre's provide original and fresh things, due to this majority of people prefer to purchase things from shopping centre's rather than local shops. Hence, to provide right and original this shopping centre's also include in any new town
In conclusion, the park or sports center and shopping centre are have their own importance and every person has different prospects about this statement. I personally believe that these three places different from each others and must be included in any new town
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03610108303 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30191330956 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563176895307 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.7085674822 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.5 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278696455738 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105073248422 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577646744679 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162347242916 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283709427495 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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