Over a period of time, green lashes are said to be the required element which needed to be present at the places where there are dewellers. But with increase in population shopping centers are been to be considered the priorty to be build in any new town or city. This development has a great impact on the people living near by either positively or negatively.
On the one side,as we know woth increase in population many individuals from small twons and cities shifts to rural areas for the faclilities which are been provided over here. As a result shopping malls also plays the same importance in any town or city. Moreover, these malls has given every individual a libralisation to get the products or services on conveinent baises. Further more, this enhanced the rate of employment among people living in that area.
On the other hand, public parks or sports centers also ahs there positive side to it. As these parks is a good source of bringing up healthy realtionships among the neighbourhood of the town one lives in. Therefore, parks not just only keeps to fit but also allows everyone to introduce one with the motive of harmonious living style which is been missing these days. Moreover, parks can be the source to provide you be the only connectivity between the nature around us.
To conclude, towns have been brurgeoning up with new schemes and new way of planning of these sort of cities have widely spread over all the countries with the introduction of shopping malls near by. To my view point i believe that these changes are good but still the advantages does outweighs the disadvantages for the same.
- In the past people wore their traditional clothes and followed their culture These days most people wear similar clothes and therefore look very similar to one another Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 44
- Everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability.agree or disagree?Give reasons and example. 73
- Today more people are travelling than ever before.Why is this the case?What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller? 56
- For many shopping malls are great places to spend their leisure time and meet others People however in the past mostly visited those when necessary To what extent do you think this is a negative trend 61
- With a fast pace of modern life more and more people towards fast food for their main meals.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. 61
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
Over a period of time, green lashes are said to be the requir...
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Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...has a great impact on the people living near by either positively or negatively. On ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...tively or negatively. On the one side,as we know woth increase in population man...
^^^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ers also ahs there positive side to it. As these parks is a good source of bringin...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'keeps fitting'.
Suggestion: keeps fitting
...ives in. Therefore, parks not just only keeps to fit but also allows everyone to introduce o...
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Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding nature'?
Suggestion: the surrounding nature
...de you be the only connectivity between the nature around us. To conclude, towns have been brurge...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'these nulls'?
Suggestion: this sort; these nulls
... new schemes and new way of planning of these sort of cities ahve widely spread
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... these sort of cities ahve widely spread
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as for, sort of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79838709677 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58908649654 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3754432591 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.1666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174387566517 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627876240704 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448744183068 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990697747434 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00990748994968 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
When it comes to the…
When it comes to the planning of new towns, the issue has triggered a widespread discussion about which is more important, to construct more public parks and sports facilities or to develop shopping centers. From my perspective, I strongly incline to the standpoint that building public parks and sports facilities matters more than constructing shopping centers for citizens.
Admittedly, building shopping malls is certainly not unimportant because they can provide goods and services available conveniently for residents. By contrast, setting up public parks and sports facilities is far more important, so greater priority should be given to it.
First and foremost, public parks are essential urban infrastructures. Public parks generally have trails for walking and biking, so they are beneficial for city dwellers to do outdoor activities during their free hours. Besides, urban public parks often have benches for sitting and many contain picnic tables and barbecue grills, which are great options for individuals to gather and socialize with families and friends on weekends. More importantly, public parks are accessible to all residents, regardless of their income, status, and other personal circumstances.
In addition, providing sports facilities for citizens should be another consideration for urban planners. To begin with, various athletic facilities can attract people of all ages to actively participate in physical exercise. Furthermore, research has revealed that office workers derive fabulous benefits from participation in sport, such as relieving stress, boosting confidence, enhancing work efficiency, and improving mental health and so on. For senior citizens, regular exercises may help to enhance the mobility and flexibility of their joints to lower the risk of injuries and falls. More than anything, sports facilities may offer opportunities for inhabitants from all walks of life to broaden their social circles by taking part in more group exercises.
In conclusion, public parks and sports facilities enrich residents’ lives in their spare time; therefore, building them seems more meaningful and urgent than constructing shopping centers in new towns.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
Over a period of time, green lashes are said to be the requir...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...has a great impact on the people living near by either positively or negatively. On ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...tively or negatively. On the one side,as we know woth increase in population man...
^^^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ers also ahs there positive side to it. As these parks is a good source of bringin...
^^
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'keeps fitting'.
Suggestion: keeps fitting
...ives in. Therefore, parks not just only keeps to fit but also allows everyone to introduce o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding nature'?
Suggestion: the surrounding nature
...de you be the only connectivity between the nature around us. To conclude, towns have been brurge...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'these nulls'?
Suggestion: this sort; these nulls
... new schemes and new way of planning of these sort of cities ahve widely spread
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... these sort of cities ahve widely spread
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as for, sort of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79838709677 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58908649654 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3754432591 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.1666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174387566517 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627876240704 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448744183068 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990697747434 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00990748994968 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.